Story - When Teasing Goes Too Far

Any updates?
Droopy and Miss

I'm a lurker type who finds and reads stories mostly after they're finished. So I haven't been among the regular participants who have encouraged Jbozz along the way.
1) I love this story.
2) I really love this story. Despite its length. I was very impressed by the flow of the early seduction chapters.
3) I was very impressed by the author's use of the Rebecca/Becky trope. Totally rocks.
4) Except Jbozz seemed to forget the premise and often himself referred the main character as Becky. No: only Davis calls her Becky! She can use the name too, to degrade herself, but the author should only call her Rebecca.

Jbozz mentioned in this chain that he had written a non-cuckold story and posted it elsewhere. Can anyone point me to his other writings? I'm a fan!

Nothing finished and ready to post yet, but it is being worked on.

Donna, I get wanting to keep your activities hidden from your husband. I hope that you haven't had TOO many slip ups.

Don, thank you for your post and kind words. As for the changes of Rebecca and Becky, I use the name differently to show the changes in her. When I am using Rebecca, she is in her wife/teacher mind set, and when I use Becky, is the times when she is more sexual and kinky as brought on by the experiences with Davis. As for other stories, yes, I have written other stories but I have not posted any of them anywhere yet. The only stories of mine that are online are on this site. I have considered posting at other sites for the non cuckold stories but I haven't put anything online yet.

Are they equally as raunchy as Becky's story?

There are people on here that seem to gravitate naturally to the top of the tree with what they do so very well. For captions I think of posters such as Jacqueline and Annikack because of the pure quality of their work. For Hot stories, your name always springs to the front of my mind, you produce exceptional tales of cuckoldry at its finest. I'm obliged to thank you for the pleasure you've given me in the past and hopefully will continue to do so.

Kenny, thank you as always for your kind words. You have supported me as long as I have been posting stories here and that is greatly appreciated. I'm sure some of the other stories are not up to the quality that some of you are used to here. I have written short stories and longer ones like this one. The earlier ones I'm sure are not up to the standard that people here are used to. But that comes in time, I'm sure my work is much better now than when I first started writing stories. Some are more extreme than Becky's story, some are more tame.

thanks again for everyone that reads my work and especially to those that continually give me feedback and support.

J

JBozz, we want to read ALL of your work, as well as the next chapter of this one.

Where can we find it?
Loving Wife, Mother, and Bryan's Slut

I'm with you 100% Donna

I think there are lots of us with Donna.

Thanks for the response. We'll just have to agree to disagree on whether the third-person narrator should ever call her "Becky". I have a copy I'm keeping in which I laboriously re-edited the text to "fix" that. {I spend way too much time editing my personal copy of porn others have written!}

Sorry Donna, I have yet to post any of my other themed stories online anywhere. The only way to find them is to have the drives that they are stored on Maybe someday I will decide to post them somewhere.

J

I can understand that Don, it kinda makes it 'personal' to you, the reader.

I can say that I speak for most of us when I say that we are eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this one!
Loving Wife, Mother, and Bryan's Slut

Mmm.......Donna, I bet your poor little pussy has had so much attention of late, as you've been thinking about Becky's fate, that it glows red in the dark now! xx

Goodness......rather than expressing a desire for you to finish this tale, I hope it just continues.....and continues

That was another great addition to your excellent story! Thanks so much for posting it here and I look forward to the continuation of your very engrossing tale.

Bump?

very good, please continue

Very Awesome! I have not read a work that is so very fitting and intense. Having been in this lifestyle for nearly 20 years this story is one of the best and keeps my interest! THANK YOU!
Mike

Anymore?
Droopy and Miss

More please Jbozz?
Loving Wife, Mother, and Bryan's Slut

You've got the poor girl begging now Jbozz. At least throw her a bone, a little snippet to keep her moist!

I am still working on the next update. sorry, no sneak peaks until the story is ready. sorry donna.

Ha. Then I won't give you a peek either.
Loving Wife, Mother, and Bryan's Slut

Donna, I hate to point out the obvious, but we've all seen the goods. Your avatar pic displays an exceptionally fine pussy, how I long to kiss it xx

Hi Jbozz, awesome story!!!

I hope there is another chapter

There will be, no worries on that score. I only hope it reaches its natural conclusion and the ultimate cuckold happens, Davis breeds her.

Jbozz, any update?

Sorry to say that I have not finished the next chapter yet. I'm having some trouble with this one. I am still working on it and look forward to when it is finished and you all can read it. Thank you all for supporting the story and for your words encouragement.

J