My Bitch Angel

I have to agree. Don't go too dark. It doesn't feel like John has any space left to humiliate himself more, except... death.

I feel sorry for him in a way that almost undoes the horniness from the details of the story. Give him some shred of humanity to stick to. Make Stacy's loving have some meaning. Let her also go through hardships, and be rescued by John. Let them both learn something from their exploits.

I know fantasies are stronger than life, and that's what most cuck stories are, fantasies. But there's something to be said in favor of real life, and what it teaches us about ourselves. Letting some of it enter your story might be, at least... interesting.

Go as dark as you want.

The good stories are the uninhibited ones. If you censor yourself, your story will suffer from it. You aren't paid a penny for sharing this with the forum, so do what you want.

Thanks for the input. I think the characters have a certain arc that they need to complete given their p e r s o n a l i t y makeup in the given circumstances. In a sense, I really don't feel I'm controlling the story. The characters are just responding to their given circumstances. It kind of writes itself.

The characters of Steve and Jan are two sexually driven sociopaths that I culled from a brief brush with the swinging community my wife and I had. These p e r s o n a l i ty types help make the story plausible.

In the early phase of our marriage, we toyed with the idea of experimenting a bit with the swinging life style. I called this guy that had an ad in some swinger's news letter. The four of us met at a local restaurant. During this meeting I jokingly asked questions about the size of his penis. He insinuated he was of normal size which is what I was hoping for. We met at their house soon after, had some small talk, and eventually got down to business. He dropped his pants in front of my wife and revealed a hard thick cock that went passed his belly button. He sat on the floor and my wife immediately sat in front of him stroking his huge cock. It wasn't the act, but the look on my wifes face that was so humiliating to me. His wife showed no interest in me, and started to kiss and lick my wife's breast and eventually ate my wife out while my wife played with his huge cock. Even though these two sexual predators were taking possession of my wife while squeezing me out of the picture, I found this highly arousing. That was the end of brief encounter with the swinging community.

I just wanted to post hese pics of the "humbler" that was used on John in the story. I described it but the picture probably explains it's function better. A very arousing concept of extreme restraint that powers and keeps the male subserviant and harmless on all fours not allowing him to stand up without ripping his balls off anyway.

Glad you're keeping your balls...incredible story! Btw, how dark can you go? Hope to read more!

Great Story . Hope he continues it at some point .

I just stumred onto this story thread and it is terrific! Super Hot! Well written! Love the psychological elements! I thought you did an excellent job explaining the dog situation and even though I do not like that genre that is not how you were using it. I could even see a future meeting with them again since our hero is in the humbler, Lol. Can't wait for the next section! Thanks for sharing your time and talents with us.

Thanks to everyone that spent some time reading this story. Glad you enjoyed it! I'm kinda surpised it was bumped up after all this time and new people are finding it.

I had forgotten how awesome that story thread is. I can't believe I was reading it over four years ago and it still slays me! Bravo man ray on your legendary story.

She lets you hump her hand.....oh god if only I found myself in that place with my Wife.

Thanks, draclif69. I remember your posting from when I was writing this. Things have changed a bit since I last wrote this story a couple of years ago. The wife has gone off the pill and this has really affected her labido making it much stronger. She really enjoys my cock immensely now. She actually cums at the same time I do with just a touch of her clit as I'm ejaculating on her. It's pretty amazing. She was interested in a guy for awhile, and they had some sessions together, but she's no longer interested. She says his cock is nothing compared to mine, and he certainly can't make her cum like I can. It really served a purpose in making her appreciate what she has at home. She likes being desired by other men, and that feeds her lust making the home activities pretty intense. She has said what she wants is other men to want her, but with none of the actual physical interaction. The cuck thing is an interesting fantasy, but I think it may be better being the bull in your wife's life. She's madly in love with me, and I think I like that.

You write "but she's no longer interested".
Does that mean the series will not be continued?
What a pity!
kraut

Hi Kraut_47. I guess it could continue. I just need to find that happy place again, and let it flow. I'm kinda bummed by the success of 50 shades of Gray which seems awfully tame to me. I think I want to write 50 shades of cuck or something. Again, glad people enjoyed. I'm thankful anyone read it.

Good idea! If you start writing "50 shades of cuck or something"; it will be a winner!



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Yeah, after all this long time, it finally goes on!

Glad you're looking forward to it. Things are moving really quickly in ways I find almost unbelievable. I plan to write more. I just need to get my head wrapped around what's happening.

She now feels confident that she is in total control of your sex.

The only thing you need to wrap your head around now is the fact that she is the boss and will define your sex life from now on.

Her way. I suggest that you get used to it.

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Apparently, you're right. Except, it's not only my sex life she's defining, it's every aspect of my life.

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Of course she is defining every aspect of your life now. She is wearing the pants. You are discovering that the longer she wears them, the better they look on her! Tell her how comfortable you feel now that she is fully in charge. There is no longer any need for shock treatments. You are ready and eager to learn the proper way to accommodate her wishes. You must be completely broken before she can begin to teach you how to behave according to her desires.

You are close but no cigar until she breaks you and you totally surrender. Once a wife begins to wear the pants, hubby can consider them to be permanently tattooed on her as far as he is concerned. It isn't possible to top from the bottom in this scenario.
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You are not supposed to feel comfortable. She may wear the pants, but understand that your bottom is the one that will feel every single bump in the road.

Here is your opportunity to let her know how much you care about her without her prompting. Because you are so well behaved, she is being denied her pleasures of administering the whip and paddle on you. Tell her that this bothers you. Suggest time in a humbler or a ruined orgasm as an alternative. Whenever she feels like it, for no particular reas on whatsoever. It demonstrates your sincerity and care for her enjoyment when you bring this solution to her on your own.

Guaranteed brownie points and pain for you and a safe outlet of deep frustrations for her!
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Glad to see you're back. Thanks for posting what's going on in your marriage.

Welcome back! I missed your life a lot.

I completely agree with isap. You must take personal pride in pleasing her no matter the impact to you. Your value as a husband should now be measured in this way. You should show her that the depths of your personal sacrifice in pleasing her knows no bounds and trust that she knows best what boundary for you is appropriate for her.

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Just playing around with my tablet and took these photos today of Stacy.

Sex this morning but she said no to any ejaculation.

Thanks for stopping by. I go in cycles. Hope you enjoy reading it.