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I need help finishing a story

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minotauro21

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It is great story, i was doing it with some guy but i never heard of him again, its interracial story, anyone that can help woul be great.
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why dont u post it and lets see what we can do
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Consider looking into the Writer's Resources at Literotica.com, specifically at http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/writ_stor.shtml. If you sign in there, you could find editing help also.

Good luck.
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i will help youl
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minotauro21

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Ok here is the story, but unfinished, need help on it.
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here is the story, i uploaded as a jpg but just change it to .docx and thats it. Please help on this. Tnx
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Here is the story as it goes right now, need help on carry on with this, i have the ideas i just need someone to write it down. Thanks




After spending a year at seperate schools, John and Mary decided they wanted to go to the same college so they could be together more and not drift apart. John had attended a Big 10 University while Mary had gone to a small private liberal arts college. They decided it was Mary who would transfer.

They had dated the last two years of high school but seen each other only during holidays during the past year. John had strayed a bit at school as guys will. Mary although she and John had 'fooled around' and she had 'fooled around' with a few guys at her small college remained a virgin.

So the last weekend in August they loaded up two cars and made the six hour drive. Mary had found an apartment during the summer and John whose parents were not as affluent was going to live in a dorm room. The plan of course was for them to stay together a lot in Mary's one bedroom apartment.

After a long drive, they moved in. John dropped his clothes and other permisterals off at the dorm and then drove out to Mary's complex. He helped her move her things into the partly furnished apartment. It seemed amazing how many boxes she had brought. It was a hot day and both were sweating from carrying the boxes up the flight of stairs and unpacking and arranging them in the apartment.

'Hey,' John said, 'Let's go for a swim!"

Mary took a take of bottled water and said "Now that’s a good idea!"

John ran down to the car to get a pair of trunks. Mary retreated into her bedroom, shut the blinds and put on a French cut pink and blue bikini. She looked at herself in the mirror and was pleased with what she saw. She wore her blonde hair cut very short. She had a pretty face with full lips and white teeth. Her blue eyes had a sort of slavic slant to them. German red she had been told. She was 5foot 4inches tall and in excellent shape. She had been on the track team in high school and was an avid jogger. Her b cup breasts were so high and firm that she rarely wore a bra. She had runner’s legs and rather narrow boyish hips.

John burst in the door of the living and quickly pulled off his sweaty shorts and jockey underwear. Mary looked at him and smiled....they had of course seen each other naked.
"JOHN!" she yelled. "Somebody is gonna see you!" The living room blinds were open.

John was 5-9 and around a one hundred and seventy five pounds. The head of his flaccid penis poked an inch or so out of his curly brown pubes.

'Who cares?' He said. "We're in college now! We can do whatever we want!"

She smiled....Knowing what he meant. They kissed and grabbed beach towels and walked hand in hand to the pool. The pool turned out to be very crowded. Moving day! People were excited and talking, also the hot day had sent many to the pool to cool off.

'There's an open spot!' Mary said and the couple headed for it.

Sitting in the corner near the open spot were four very athletic looking young black men.

John knew who they were, at least two of them. Aries Simmons was an All Big 10 linebacker and Derrick Evans a running back who had been in his English 101 class. The other two must be football players as well. They had the look.

John mouthed "Hey guys" as he spread out his towel. Mary laid hers out on the otherside. She sat down quickly crosslegged and opened a diet pepsi.

"What up?" Derrick said recognizing him. " We wuz in English....Randy right?"

"No, John, John Roberts...this is...my girlfriend Mary."

Mary looked over at the guys. "Hi" she said, smiling sweetly. "I'm Mary Miller."

"These guys play football here." John offered.

"Cool!" Mary beamed. "Nice to meet you!"

"I'm Derrick" the powerful 6 footer said raising up and waving his hand.

"I'm Aries. Nice to meet ya'all" Said the other player John had reckognized. He was 6-3 and a rock solid 235 pounds. He had incredible shoulder muscles that strained when he pushed against his deck chair to stand up. He shook hands with John and stepped past him and reached a large hand out to Mary. Mary. still sitting up, reached up and gently grasped his hand.
"Nice to meet you, Aries." Mary said, quickly looking up at his handsome face. She was a little embarrassed and did not know why.

The two other players also stood up.

"I'm Zack" said a smooth faced and long muscled athlete. He was rather light skinned and good looking. He was 6-2 and right around 200lbs. He sat down.


"I'm Ty" burst the young man sitting farthest away. He was very dark skinned and the smallest of the group. He was around 5-10 180lbs and had no visible body fat. He had a very small waist and his trunks hung low seeming to want to slide off his hips. He walked quickly... he did everything fast....over to John and Mary and shook hands. He held Mary's hand a bit longer than necessary. Mary could see his eyes wander over her body. It made her a bit uneasy.

"John played football in High School!' Mary chirped. John grimaced.

"Thats cool" Aries said. "What position?"

"Running back" John answered.

"Thats what I play." Derrick said.

The conversation continued. The guys asked where they were from, what they were going to take in school...the same conversation you here on campuses all over the country.

"So you like this complex? Which building do ya'll live in?" Aries asked.

"I live in Building B." Mary answered. "John is staying in Smith Hall."

"Oh? You living in the dorms huh?" Aries querried.

"Yea." John said. "But I'll be here a lot"

"Cool" Aries answered.

"I'm gonna get in the water!" Mary said, lithely springing to her feet.

Even playing it cool, four sets of eyes watched her stand, adjust her suit and walk to the water’s edge and then neatly dive in. John caught their glances and then he stood up and also dived in the pool. Mary swam to the other side and John joined her, leaning on the edge of the pool. He wrapped an arm around her and kissed her.

"JOHN!" Mary said. "Those guys are watchin' us!"

She kissed him back, and then bit his ear so he yelped and splashed. Then she swam back to the other sided of the pool very fast.

"Damn! You can swim? Do you swim here?" Aries asked.

"Nah!" Mary said grabbing a towel and drying off. "I ran track...but that was just in high school. I like to swim and run and stuff. Gotta try to stay in shape"

"You look like you're in pretty good shape to me." Aries said evenly.

"To me too!" Ty laughed

"Ty, shut up!" Zack said. "Don't pay any attention to Ty. He's a dumbass."

About that time John climbed out of the pool. He grabbed his towel.

He and Mary talked quietly for a few seconds and they said their goodbyes to the four football players.

The guys watched them, or rather watched Mary walk away.

"Damn, that girl is fine!" said Derrick. Ty agreed.

"She is nice and she has got a boyfriend!" Intoned Zack.

"Yea, well he don't look like much to me!" Aries said and switched his voice to a high pitched imitation of Mary..."John played in high school!"

They all laughed at that one, even Zack.

__________________________________________________ ______________________

That night John and Mary got a pizza and beer and watched TV at Mary's apartment. After a while they started kissing, Johns hands wandered over her body.

"Well, we're here. We're alone." John said. He reached into his backpack and pulled out a box of condoms. He looked at her.

"Not tonight. OK? I am really tired. I want everything to be perfect." Mary said, and kissed him.

"OK...." he said. "I need to go unpack my cuckolds brownie anyway."

"Sorry!" She said. "It's been a really long day."

They kissed and John departed. Crossing the parking lot he ran into Aries and Zack. He nodded at them and went and started his car.

"Hmmmm...He ain't stayin' the night?" Aries asked.

"Maybe not." Zack said. "Maybe they aren't that tight."

"Maybe they ain't that tight...but I bet she is!" Aries laughed.

The next day was the first day of classes. Aries and Zack walked across campus to a Sociology class that they shared. They were both above average
students though Aries would often play it off as if it weren't cool to be too smart in school.

Mary had gotten up and taken a quick shower. She dried herself off and slid on panties and a pair of baggy green cargo shorts. She pulled a tank top
over her bare chest and slipped on a pair of Teva sandals. Grabbing her back pack she headed for the Arts building and her first class at her new school.

Aries and Zack saw Mary walking across the campus courtyard in their direction.

"Hey! Ain't that our girl from the pool?" Aries said.

"Sure is." Zack said. "She sure is a cute thing"

"MMMMmmmm Mmmm! Look at them titties bounce!" Aries said and ***ly shifted his organ around in his shorts.

Mary smiled when she recognized them and made a sort of skip a to quicken her stride towards them.
Her firm young breasts bounced with each step.

Both young men watched and made sure as she got closer they were looking her in the face.

"Hey guys!" Mary smiled broadly. She had a pretty smile, her whole face lit up.

"Hey girl! What you up to?" Zack said.

"Going to class, my first one." She replied

"You lookin' awful cute today!" Aries said.

Mary just shrugged. "Well, I gotta run! Nice to see you guys!"

They turned and watched her walk away. "Man she got something about her! Not a knock out but kinda fresh and sexy!" Aries said. "And damn
her tits look good!"

"C'mon Man!" Zack intoned, We're gonna be late." They both turned to watch her.


Mary enjoyed her first class. The size of the university made for a lot more art resources but the classes were much larger. She scoped around her class for cute guys but a sophomore level art class didn't offer many possibilities.

Her second class was a rather boring lecture in a huge auditorium style classroom. She was hungry upon leaving class. John had told her he would meet her at Powell Hall Dining Room. She was early and grabbed a diet soda and sat and opened a school book to start reading the assignment she had been given in her last class.

She was reading when she was startled by someone sitting beside her. She looked up expecting John...it was Tyrone.

"Wazzzup?" he asked.

"Oh...you scared me!...Hi. It's Ty right?"

"Yea, I just came in to get somethin' to eat. Derrick is s'posed to be here." He looked around.

"I'm meeting John." She said, looking around as well.

"That's cool!" Ty replied. "You lookin' nice today. You really got a pretty tan."

"Yea." She said. "Pools will all be closin' soon. I'm gonna get a little more sun today."

Mary stood up looking around the crowded cafeteria for her boyfriend. Ty's eyes went up and down her body. Again...she caught him and sat down.

Derrick came through the door next. The muscular running back was wearing a tank top too and his shoulders bulged carrying a pair of books and a walkman. He was wearing dark sunglasses.

"Wassup?" He said seeing Ty.

"OH! Its our new neighbor! Wassup girl?" He took Mary's hand and dropped his books on the table. He checked her out through his shades. Nice

"Hey...we gotta hurry. I need to eat and go meet with my coach" Ty said. "Wanna get in line with us?"

"I better wait on John" She said.

"Oh OK, blowin' a brother off!" Derrick laughed, halfway meaning it. They both stood up and got in line.

John came in a few minutes later in a huff. "Sorry! I had to call my Dad, somebody ran into my car in the parking lot

"Oh? Is it bad?"

"Nah, just a dent and a couple of long scratches but I'll have to get the whole door painted. My Dad is pissed."

"Whose stuff is that?" He said, pointing down to the table.

"Oh, a couple of those guys from the pool. Derrick and the other one, the smaller one." Mary said.

"What are they doing here? Are they hitting on you?", he asked testily.

"No, they're sweet!" she said.

"Yeah! Right!" he rolled his eyes.

"Lets go get some food! I'm starved." She gave him sad smile. "Sorry about your car."

John and Mary returned after the slow sideways scoot through the cafeteria line. Ty and Derrick were still seated and looked up smiling when the young white couple returned. They had noticed the quivering motion of Mary’s breasts in the tank top as she carried her tray back to the table.

The conversation went quickly to football and the upcoming home opener. Ty and Derrick both told them they needed to be sure to come to the game, that the team was going to be good this year. The two football players did most of the talking in between eating their food very quickly. They stood up to go, said their goodbyes and Ty stepped forward quickly and planted a small kiss on Mary’s cheek.

“Damn, you got another boyfriend there?” John bristled.

“Oh John! Don’t be silly!” Mary pouted and then smiled extra big. It was one of the things she did that John loved and she did it anytime he got a little peeved at her and it always made him smile back. “They are just being sweet!”



Mary had finished her classes for the day and went back to the apartment. It was very sunny and she decided to take her books and do some studying out by the pool. She read for a while and then decided to lay on her stomach and even out her tan. She reached behind her undoing the plastic closure of the aquamarine bikini top. It had been an eventful two days and she drifted in and out of a half relax, the sun feeling good on the naked skin of her back.
Mary had dozed off and she felt a hand touching her shoulder…was it part of a dream?

“Hey! HEY! You’re gonna burn if you’re not careful!”

Mary came out of her drowsy state enough to see that Aries was kneeling next to her. He picked up her bottle of suntan lotion and squeezed it….lotion shot out in a stream some on his hand some shooting onto her back.

“OOOPS! It went off! Got too excited I guess!” He laughed. “Here. Let me rub this on ya.”

Aries rubbed the lotion over the warm smooth skin of her back. He felt his cock twinge slightly. Damn her skin is nice, he thought.

He rubbed it into her back and shoulders and breathed in as he rubbed it on her sides down to where her breasts began to swell. He felt her firm flesh give as he rubbed the cocoanut smelling lotion into that sensitive area. He rubbed it down her back. Her back had muscle on either side of the backbone. He pushed the lotion down to the small aquamarine bikini bottom. He rubbed it in remarking at the fitness of her back and then slid his fingers under the thin fabric. He looked down to see his fingers slide along inside of the panties and he ran them down almost where the two twin cheeks he was admiring started their delicious part. Fuck she has a hot little ass!

He felt Mary stiffen and withdrew his hand.

“You got a little line of sunburn down there!” He said. “You don’t wanna burn up that little butt now!”

“You want me to do your legs?” he asked.

Mary reached up with one hand. Keeping her body pressed tight to the towel and her top.

”Uh,,, no thanks. I can do that myself.” She said. “But thanks for puttin’ that lotion on me.”

“Hey, anytime! Believe me it was my pleasure!” Aries laughed.

Mary laughed too. Rather nervously. She felt herself flush. She felt a reaction somewhere else too. In her loins.
He had put his hands inside her bottoms. Just a bit. Very innocently it seemed. And not so innocent! Mary could feel the sexual tension. Moreover what was worse, she could feel her sex dampen. Somewhere in her was something that liked his fingers on her flesh…inside her bikini bottoms…almost “feeling up” her naked ass!

“Yea! I bet!” She said mockingly. She reached down with one hand and pulled at the hem of the bikini bottoms pulling them back up just a bit.

He settled back sitting on the bare concrete. “You know, if you and your boyfriend want, you can use my family tickets for the game. Nobody is coming up this weekend to use ‘em. They’re goodass seats, a lot better than the normal student tickets.”

“That’s nice of you!” She said smiling and squinting in the sun looking up at him. “I’ll ask John!”

“OK. You do that. I gotta hit it. We got practice this afternoon.”


Early that evening, she mentioned the tickets to John. He was planning to return home for a Labor Day picnic. It was a big family thing and they had gone together the last few years. She told him she had a lot to do and after all they had just got there and it would mean 12 hours in a car over the weekend to come and go. John got a bit angry and left pouting. Mary was so mad and upset tears ran down her cheeks.

She decided to go to the library and study a little.

She left wearing a snug fitting red t shirt and short cutoff blue jean shorts. She chose a table by the back window of the library. She sat quietly reading an art history text. A few rows away Zack sat watching the young blonde. He too had been studying, but looked up from his book and all of a sudden….she was just there.

Wow. She really is a cutie! And the guys are right. She does have a pretty body! Nice legs!

Mary got up to get a take of water and walked away him. He watched the movement of her hips and the muscles move in her legs. Coming back he watched the firm breasts moving slightly with each step, the nipples poking against the cotton. His eyes, dropped to the crotch of the cutoff jeans…damn! Then….

“Zack!” He looked up to see that she had recognized him….Hopefully not noticing he was staring at her crotch….

“Hey Mary!” She came over.

“Hi Zack! I see you guys everywhere!” She said.

“It’s just we’re the first people you met. For a big school it seems like a small campus sometimes. You’ll see.” He told her.

“The last school I went to had 800 students…It seems huge to me! I guess I’ll get used to it. So what are you doing here?” She asked

“Trying to get some studying done. The guys either watch TV or play PlayStation 24-7! They can get pretty loud. I like it here. I can think.”

“Me too.” She said. “They have a great amount of art resources here. And I really like these tables near the windows. That way I can study or day dream.”

“Day dream? What kinda stuff do you daydream about?” He asked.

“MMMMMMMM!” She said smiling naughtily. “All kinds of stuff!”

The thought was intriguing but he let it go.

“Aries offered me and John his tickets to the game!” Mary chirped.

“That’s cool! It’ll be a good game!” He said. Aries is workin’ it.

“Yeah! I’m psyched to see a game here! Shelby College didn’t have much of a football team! There were more people in my English class here than would go to the games there.”

“Yea major college football is great! It’s a great atmosphere at the games! You will enjoy it.”

She kinda pouted. “I’m not sure if I’m gonna come. John is going home and maybe I should go with him. We kinda had a fight!”

“Sorry to hear that!” he said, lying more than a little.

“Yea! He has some family thing with all of his cousins and stuff! It’s boring! I think I’m gonna stay here this weekend! Yeah. I AM gonna stay here. Tell Aries, I won’t need the ticket though. I’ll just get one in the student section.”

“No. Go ahead and take Aries’s. He’s from Florida and his mom only comes up to one game a year. Really, you should use it. Bring somebody else.”

“I really don’t know anybody but John and you guys!” She shrugged.

“You’ll meet lots of people.” He looked down at his watch. “This place closes in ten minutes; I better get going.”

“Yea me too!” She went to her table and began stuffing her books in her backpack. She filled it and still had three books and a notebook and her purse that she wrestled into her free arm.

“Here! Let me carry those!” he said. She started to prote
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