crypton:
The reason I tried this was mostly self-interested. I wanted to try my hands on video-editing and I thought it's a good way to tell stories like in these multi-part-captions. I realised, that these videos are a lot of work. To have an idea and cutting the clips is one part, but the search for adequate and classy clips is really time-consuming and can be quite frustrating.
Really class act editing!
Critique: Too busy. Stuff happens very fast. Trying to carry many very good themes too close together makes the work excessively hard for you to create and your viewers to follow. I liked the shots showing the wife's responses to her lovers efforts. I would have also liked to have seen the cuckold's reactions during the salient parts of the cheat. I happily gave all three videos 5 stars each and this thread 3 points! Amazing artwork! I hope that you continue this thread!
Thank you.
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