robf
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I've been working on a series of stories - they still need to be touched up and embellished - but I'd like to post them here and see what people think. It will be a long running, intermixed series with other storylines mixed in, but what I am trying to go after is a guy with the pussy goggles on, and what he is all willing to do... while keeping it realistic. I have some experience with this genre in real life, and what I am trying to get to is "how did I get sucked into this situation", while trying to keep it "real."
Anyway, here are the three stories I've written. They are all connected - and are all pretty raw yet. But tell me what you think, please. Too boring? Too drawn out? Too analytical?
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