Don Jetman
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Timmy27
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Great story Don. Thank you.
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randyadrian
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yes very good
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bpop
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Wonderful! Thank you.  Christine |
donna4blackuse
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Excellent, as all your writings are.
Loving Wife, Mother, and Bryan's Slut
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What else can I say ???
I think you already know that you are among the best story teller´s
Even when some of your style gets a little out of my own bounds about the this subject, when I read U, it simply reads sweet nice and easy with that mix between jealouzy, tenderness, bittersweet agony. As if all you characters were new and discovering this new aspect of life.
Please keep it going.
Ludo M.
Rogger Bbit
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