Don Jetman
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Greenman
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Wonderful vignette, Don. Written in your own special way, it is completely believable and very arousing. Glad to see that you have decided to continue on the vignette theme. It allows for a lot of interesting situations to be probed without having to develop a whole story. I look forward to reading more with great anticipation.
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Timmy27
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Don, a great little piece. Thank you for sharing your talent
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bcs
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Hot story!
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Don Jetman
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goodhusband
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Just had a chance to read this. Very hot.
Thank you
GH
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