peakmb:
However, can I suggest that you first type your story into Word (or similar) first and then spell check and grammar check it.
This is a question; it needs a question mark at the end of the sentence.
peakmb:
Then take out all the numbers and type the words instead (unless its a time).
The word "its" should have an apostrophe.
Plus, a bit more detail next time, you had some good events to describe.
There's a missing verb here. It should be, "Plus,
provide a little detail next time." Or replace "provide" with another verb.
Also, there either needs to be a semicolon between the words "time" and "you," or you need to break those sentences up.
Just a few grammatical pointers for ya.
c.w.