goodhusband
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Timmy27
I liked the the first chapter. There are very few pure cuckold short stories around right now. I mean ones where the guy doesn't get his nuts cut off or the obese seventy year old industrial arts teacher next door doesn't beat the husband with a whip while he fucks his wife or as in the case of my story the writer gets so hung up in detail that he forgets how to tell the story.
It's nice to read a story about a wife who loves her husband but craves sex with lots of men and he just gets off on it. Nothing flashy, nothing "sophisticated, just good old cuck porn.
You're right, the second story gets a little wild, but that's the problem, we all want to try for something new and better. It's easy to forget that the model T was a very good car.
Of course none of us would want to be driving model T's today and thats the dilema. Still there is nothing more thrilling than walking into the Rembrandt room at the National Gallery of Art.
I did take a break several months ago and wrote "Concubine". I loved it. Right now however it is taking all of the energy I can muster to finish "Courtesan". Finishing a long story is very difficult. Just look at how few stories at this site ever get finished. Look at the obvious difficulty Daniel Q. Steele, a very gifted writer, is having with WWWM. His posts are becoming farther and farther apart.
Reading stories is so much fun and so easy.Much easier than writing them. This evening I read a very nice cheating wife story. Those have been my passion for the past year. Ohio and Longhorn are my favorite writers. That was the motivation for "Courtesan". I wanted to write a cheating wife story that was actually a cuckold story.
My two dogs are reading this over my shoulder and urging me to go to bed. Sorry, Canadian Whiskey can at times be a bit too inspirational.
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Shit, I'll bet dilema has two m"s. My Kingdom! My Kingdom for a spell checker!
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