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I have been writing a collection of interracial stories with white females (me in fantasy land) and dominant black males. My only reward to this is reader feedback. I would love for you to check these out and provide some feedback at the end. Hope you like
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Ok, this is my feedback.


"Girlfriend Meets His Roommates" is just too... like a script, or a synopsis. The idea is there, but I don't feel involved in the story.

"Girls' Night Out" is much better. I love the idea of a gang of girls having fun with black guys. The text is more narrative... yes, it's much better.

"Kali Opens Up Ch. 01" is also a fine reading. I like to read the adventure of a naughty white wife who is accomplice with her husband. I want to know more.

Just one piece of advice : let your reader enter inside your head and your heart. That's what your audience want. Your texts are good, but I'd like to feel myself lost inside you, feel your own arousing, feel your lust for black men.

But since English is not my native language, maybe I'm wrong.

This is one of my own stories (the only one in English), so you can see if my comments are useful or not :
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Anyway, keep up the good work !

Edit : Kalin Opens Up Ch.02 is really good

Thanks fredo. Girlfriend meets his roomates was my first story ever and I took the advice of the readers and tried to get better. I think each of my stories have progressively gotten more well written. I appreciate the feedback and enjoyed your story also.

Thanks Hun

I have written a new published novel on this subject and have 2 more coming out.

I've done a little writing myself. (I have to, my wife won't do what I want her to do) These are links to stories that I've written.
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and the last one is here, but you must go to the bottom of the page where it starts, it's kind of out of order.

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great thread and stories, hope to see more!
http://www.tumblr.com/blog/dustinsrealm

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K McDonald
Great stories

Silverwing

Thankyou! Those are the fantasies that keep me going. I have my wife pictured every time I come up with something. It's weird that I don't really fantasize about anyone else. Just my wife getting stretched really good by a hung black man.

dustindoe08
Quite a compliment coming from the great dustindoe. Love your work

erica I liked your stories as well! I sent you an email on Literotica.