hornyhubby28
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#2 Posted: 17 Nov 2009 04:13
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Here's the beginning for anyone not wanting to follow the link:
My wife Candace and I had been trying to get pregnant for well over a year. We were both 32 and should have been nearing the prime of our sexual fertility, but after many doctors appointments, pokes, prods, and embarrassing sperm donations the doctors had determined that my sperm were unable to swim well enough to impregnate her. It was a tremendous blow to hear that I could not give my wife the very thing she wanted so much in life; to be a mommy.
We looked into artificial insemination, discussing it with multiple doctors but the $25,000 price tag for the procedure was far too much for us to afford. Besides, the thought of another man's sperm inside my wife gave me nightmares at night knowing some faceless stranger was essentially doing for my wife what I couldn't and that she would proudly carry his baby for nine months.
One night Candace had emerged from the bathroom looking like an angel. She was 5'6" and 125lbs with a white sheer baby doll nighty hanging over her petite body, giving me an only slightly impeded view of her small but firm breasts. Her nipples, which had always had a size and length that embarrassed her and tantalized me, were already hard and poking at the fabric to form the most delightful little points. Her dark blond hair flowing over her shoulders and covering the thin straps of the baby doll, with only her silver loop earrings poking between the locks of her head. Her blue eyes looking at me with a touch of nervousness but desire as I stare at her beautiful figure silhouetted by the transparent white gown. Underneath I can see she is only wearing a small silk thong, hiding the mystery of her delicious womanhood just enough to make me want to reveal it fully.
I bounded off the bed and walked to her, kissing her tiny red lips and looking into her lightly freckled face as she looks into mine. Our tongues slowly caressing each others as we kissed and I slowly slide my hand down her back to gently caress her tight firm buttocks.
I layed back in the bed gently pulling her on top of me. She brushed her hair back from her face on one side as she looked down at me with a knowing and loving smile. Her legs straddling my body, her knees up around my hips as she rhythmically begins to slide herself up and down trying to entice my cock into her.
Suddenly I feel the warmth accept my head and Candace lets out a cute little soft sigh pushing her hips down and enveloping my entire shaft in the moist warm folds of her pussy. "Oh god baby," I moan feeling all of my cock inside my wife's amazing body. She put her hands on my chest lifting her shoulders up and slowly and seductively begins to slide herself up and down over my aching penis.
Stricken with lust I reach up and cup and lovingly fondle her breasts with my hands as she rides me, feeling them heave through the soft mesh fabric. She closes her eyes as I gently pinch the erect nipples on the tip of her breasts and then lift her gown to put my mouth on each and suckle it gently between my lips.
The feeling of her pussy's warm embrace becomes to much for me and I begin to moan as she rocks her hips so gently and purposefully working me in and out of her. I felt my balls tighten underneath her body and my cock swell as I began to release my cum into her inviting mound. As she feels the warmth of my semen flooding her body she too begins to pant heavily and moan along with me. Her body shivers and her back arches as she lays on top of me kissing me deeply as she orgasms. I reach down to hold her firm small ass tightly, holding myself in her as she spasms on my cock.
As she lays on top of me, both of us breathless Candace looks down at me and nervously begins to speak. Her voice waivers as she says, "Troy we've been trying this for months. I don't think its going to work, and I really want a baby."
"I know honey, but there's no way we have the money for that." I respond, "Besides its awfully fun to keep trying..." I say with a smile.
"Yes...I guess it is," she responds unconvincingly. "But Troy, I heard of a place in town that offers insemination for only $200..."
"$200!" I respond incredulously, "Candace that's insane! Even if it were true it can't be legal, and who knows what kind of sperm donor you'd be getting!"
Candace pulls herself from my arms, beginning to pace the room nervously, "I know it sounds too good to be true, but I thought it was at least worth investigating honey. Please, I really want a baby and we can at least just go down and talk to them. In fact...I made us an appointment for tomorrow afternoon."
"Candace we don't even know if this place is legit!" I continued to protest, "And you're making appointme........"
Candace cut me off cooing, "Honey just trust me and go with it," as she crawled on the bed and gently began sucking my cock, her warm mouth and tongue making me forget any disagreement.
"Y-Yes baby...we c-can try it..." I moan in response. Despite having just gone, she has me hard again quickly and I cum in only a few seconds as she sucks me. Candace doesn't even bother to pull her face from my cock knowing there won't be very much to swallow. Almost immediately I fall asleep from exhaustion, trying to forget the problems we had.
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stormydog
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#3 Posted: 17 Nov 2009 06:57
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Very good, hornhubby! Very well written, with tremendous erotic detail and a great start on building loving, interesting characters. I hope you will continue it here, I suspect it will be well received.
As Goodhusband pointed out recently, literotica has its good and bad sides. Some will like what you put up while others will not, and those sorry few will tend to be very nasty about it. They chose to read it however, when they could have simply clicked away, so ignore them and write for the ones that are enjoying it.
This is a more focused forum for this type of story. I believe you will find most of the readers here to be much less judgmental, and more appreciative of your efforts.
Thanks again for posting this chapter, I very much enjoyed it.
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