Courtesan

GH,
I think we bade our favorite characters farewell in the style which they deserved. Sweet sorrow indeed. A wonderful story my friend. Thankyou so much for all the pain and anguish it has taken to give it to us. Only you knows whether it was worth it but I for one am eternally grateful.

Just one last point, I think I agree that scholars will continue to revise the works of Homer, but then I think that the works of Marge will be talked about even more as time goes on ..

goodhusband:

Thank you for sharing the adventures of 10 very interesting people!

This was one hell of a story and I really enjoyed each and every segment.

gh,

wow!!!!! what an excellent way to bring this to a close............also leaving an opening for another story but it would be difficult to keep all the characters straight.......the work of a master.......we all thank you very much for your hard work.....


sallyann

Absolutely wonderful, gh! I echo the sentiments above, a great ending and bittersweet, but it's been a wonderful ride getting here. Thank you so much my friend. priss

Bittersweet indeed, but what a wonderful and heartwarming wrap up! That was masterful GH, and there is much I'd like to say about your tale, but I'll keep it simple: Thank you my friend, for giving me a much needed escape during some tough times. It's been a blessing.

GH

My golf game was rained out today so I stayed home and caught up on some reading. This is an excellent story (a novel really) by a great writer. I'm so glad you finished it for us.

All your works on this site have been very much appreciated. I look forward to reading many more of them in the future, so you should definitely continue to post here. I'm sure the rest of your silent following all feel the same way.

Roger

GH
Let me add my comments to those of your long time friends.
This story has done more to give me an understanding of the cuckold lifestyle then anything I could have read. I believe that I have changed from a negative about the lifestyle to a person who can understand the feelings of those involved.
You and Timmy and Stormy have really done me an absolute favor in writing this story with its "serendipity" as April describes it. Also the stories that Timmy and Stormy have going.
I think that I might find the b---s to try to write a story.
Thank you again for a life style change that you have given me and maybe my wife.

Well after several months of not being able to log into the site I am finaly able to again. Just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story, you no doubt put a lot of time and energy into it and it shows! just because I wasn't able to log in didn't mean I wasn't reading and enjoying this story. Your the best! take time to rest enjoy some down time play some golf and enjoy your wife, it is well deserved.

You mentioned in one of your comments about possibly another chapter to Comcubine?? is there still a possibilty of that happening? I agree this should remain a very short story but another chapter with closure would be great.

Take care, oh and by the way although I am not a golfer, I was in Tucson Az a couple of weeks ago at a golf resort, the course looked absolutely beautiful.
Techcuck

GH, there is no possible way to ever thank you for all the hard work that went into bringing us this masterpiece. I was there from the beginning and now I'm sad to say, I'm here at the end. You are the master, you should be proud. This was just an excellent story and I'm ashamed to admit that I almost gave up on it in the beginning because I was unhappy with the way Kelly was treating Timmy. You told me to hang in there and I did, and I'm so glad I listened to you.

I don't know what you have planned for the future, but trust me, I'll keep checking back here for a new story from you one of these days. Or...........perhaps the much anticipated conclusion to one of my favorites that is still hanging out there.

Again, thank you, my friend, for entertaining us all this time. Quite an enjoyable diversion. Hopefully you'll take some time off and unwind before you choose your next path. Go play some golf and enjoy the summer.

TrF2

GH

It's all been said by the others, so all I am going to say is, thanks!
You know, something was amiss on this site of late.
Then I realised that familiar names were missing from page 1.
I make no apologies for bumping you back on to the first page, how else are new readers going to find out what they are missing?
I hope you are having a well deserved rest and I look forward with the others to your welcome return.
Good luck and God bless my friend.

G.

Greenman

Thank you, I appreciate your note and the bump. You better than anyone understands how difficult it is to write a long story. I'm not certain if I have another story in me. I have started several, but they all end up being the same. If I do write another story, it is going to have to be different. I may still try to write some short stories. Right now my attention is focused on reediting "Courtesan". That project is almost over.

Thank you again

GH

In the meantime, everyone write some stories.

Create an outline - that means, plan the entire story before you start writing it. Don't just write, "My wife went out on a date and I'm really excited" and then try to make it up as you go along. Remember, all good stories have a beginning, a middle and an end. Plan your story that way.

Use a space between paragraphs. That makes the story much more readable. Everytime someone speaks it should be a new paragraph. Too many paragraphs are much better than too few.

When you're writing the sex scenes go to the porn sites. Find pictures series that represent what you imagine is happening with your wife and her lover and then describe what is happening in the pictures. Remember the advice of my buddy Peakmb, the devil is in the detail. A porn site I always used is askjolene.com.

Putting your fantasy into words is fun. Try it. When you write, just put it down like your telling your buddies. Use your own words. That's all any of us want and it works really well.

This site has a history of wonderful stories. Some of them inspired me to start writing. Now it's your turn. Please go for it. You will not fail.

I look forward to reading your stories.

GH