jasmine4ucox
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#751 Posted: 2 Mar 2007 12:39
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took me a long time to read, but it was good
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weslrobt
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#752 Posted: 11 Mar 2007 16:45
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GH,
Haven't been around for awhile... Life has gotten in the way a bit, but just got to finish the story and wanted to say Thanks!!! one more time. Is an incredible story and I can understand how you feel about it completely. I know it was a lot of work for you and I really appreciate all of your efforts. At the same time, I think I could read about all of these guys for years to come. Thanks for such a compelling story and all of your hard work and dedication to it.
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bovary
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#753 Posted: 12 Mar 2007 02:42
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GH--
Thank you very much for staying with your story. We enjoyed it!
Bovoary (Mr & Mrs)
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goodhusband
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#754 Posted: 27 Mar 2007 04:35
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bovary (Mr & Mrs)
Thankyou.
When I finished writing this story I swore that I would not write on this thread again. I am violating that oath at this moment.
I also said that my first task would be to read the story. I didn't do that. I attempted to start new projects way to quickly.
I just finished reading this story, (When you write a story you don't actually get to read it.)
I have decided that I will return to these charachters. I am going totake my time and draft a new outline. The story will be another ongoing serial.
I will finish the two stories that I have started but not for awhile.
Aprils story is the one that I really want to finish. What is stopping me right now is that it becomes a very sad story for awhile.
When I read Sandra and Stevie the sex parts are fun, but my favorite parts are the nonsex segments. Maybe you guys should expel me from this web site.
I have decided to continue the story because I have already done much of the charachter development. I can write every kind of scene I want within the context of the story I have.
I will post some more to Roxanne and willie soon. I am taking another golf vacation next week so I am going to take a serious break. Also the golf season is starting here. You might notice that I started Sandra and Stevie in the fall as the golf season was ending.
GH
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goodhusband
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#755 Posted: 27 Mar 2007 04:46
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Unfinished business to be addressed in a new thread
Sandra has a date with one of the partners from Stevie's firm
Everyone has to move into the new house
Maddie and Jamal are getting married - they will have a wedding and a stag party
Pat and Ed Monroe may have a dark secret. Is it possible that Sandra comes by her infidelity genetically?
Can the cucks become billionaires?
Will Roxanne and Willie meet our friends? Roxanne does happen to attend Maple Hills.
The soap opera will be back!
GH
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Jennifer Allen
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#756 Posted: 21 May 2007 23:03
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I am enjoying Roxanne and Willie but I just found this story. I love it
Jenn
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goodhusband
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#757 Posted: 23 May 2007 00:07 · Edited by: goodhusband
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Thanks Jenn
I don't know how far you have gotten in this story. I really enjoyed writing it. I know that it takes a long time to read it. I have gone back and read it myself since I finished it. It has several twists that I really enjoy.
I know that I am not a great writer, but I feel good about having written this story.
This is a good time to read it because I am gradually pulling some of the pictures out of it.
GH
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goodhusband
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#758 Posted: 22 Aug 2007 13:02
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This is my second story and my personal favorite
GH
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subchard
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#759 Posted: 18 Sep 2007 18:54
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GH, Having read your other stories I finally found this one and have just completed it. Absolutely great as usual!
Looking forward to reading more about April and how she went from Ponce and Danny to the husband she has in this story.
keep up the good work!
subchard
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upstnym
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#760 Posted: 19 Sep 2007 05:24
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Good story. Are you really in the financial industry? I am. upstnym@yahoo.com
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goodhusband
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#761 Posted: 20 Sep 2007 12:52 · Edited by: goodhusband
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upstnym
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed my story and thankyou for taking the time to tell me.
No, I'm not in the financial industry, but I have several close friends who spend a lot of time studying the market. I try to listen carefully to their conversations.
I actually have one friend who is retired and spends his time doing the kind of research that I describe Stevie doing.
GH
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Lisaandmikey
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#762 Posted: 19 Jan 2010 07:59
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My husband gave you this story
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peakmb
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#763 Posted: 20 Jan 2010 02:29
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Lisa, And we still appreciate it. Your post caused me to re-read my own closing comment. I still think it sets a benchmark against which others have to be judged. Your husband wrote it, look after him as you always have.
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stormydog
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#764 Posted: 22 Apr 2011 22:02
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And one more! I hope some enjoy these treasures - and others enjoy them again.
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