My First Attempt

Feel free to offer criticisms, comments, suggestions.

Good start. My only suggestion would be to make the text larger. Many here with older eyes have complained about small font size in the past. Try enlarging the pic if necessary to make room for larger text.

Don

I agree with Don. Below is the same picture. I enlarged only the bottom part using windows paint, filled it in with black and used a size 14 font.

I'm sure you'll agree that the result is much better. I did have a hard time getting your text right. But I think I did.

Have fun. Hope to see some more.

Timmy

A very nice start LikesMMF!

Thank you for your comments and helpful advice.

Can't tell you how helpful it is to get constructive criticism from caption experts Don Jetman and Timmy27. I have admired their work for a long time. Here I will try to put their tips to use. Any further tips or comments would be appreciated.

Love seeing those superior cocks. So hard not to want to service them.

Believe me, I know exactly what you mean, mwm. But why fight against it? Why not service them?

The layout is much better than your first try. Happy to help out.

Content of both caps was good. So please keep going.

T

Much better. Best advice I can give is play with the content, format, and style to make it your own. Let the pics "talk" to you, then just add what they say. Tumblr has some great photos. Practice - keep 'em coming.

Don

It is so helpful to receive encouragement from caption gods Timmy27 and Don Jetman. Following up on Don's advice, this is what this picture said to me:

That is a huge one. So hot.

You've really got the hang of this now, an excellent cap, and technically good as well. Loved the Hotwife depicted, about to accept the biggest cock she's ever had (yet) plus it's black, long, and eye wateringly thick. You're right of course, once they discover cocks like these, their demands change also - big is always best!

My next attempt. Again, good advice from Mr Jetman to let the picture speak to me. This is what I pictured this MILF to be saying to her husband.

His cock is bigger than yours too

I just noticed something. I have a rating!!! Thank you to those who have rated me.

My next attempt.

Bigger than you by far

What a beautiful cock! Thanks!!

Enjoy, cucks.

College Boy

some guys are so hung!

When your wife is like this with that hung guy, you know that your cuckold status is permanent.

So comfortable with another guy

keep them coming and us too!

Love the pics and captions! I like the one of the big dicked young stud above - nothing like one of those cuckolded a husband and pleasing their wife - love those type of stories and experiences

Trying another one.

Impressive!

Can he get it all the way in?

Just because I'm hung . . .

She shows him everything!

Very good caps, thanks!

Thank you, subchard. I appreciate a nice comment like that from somebody with taste as good as yours.

i have to agree with don jetman... the picture has to speak to you, or it comes across as ********', or the words just don't match the scene. People really have no idea how much time we cappers spend scouring the net, looking for those few pics that yell out ot us.

Great work... keep it up!

very sexy!

All hope is lost if this is the case:

She loves it