MY GODDESS CAPTIONS - (First Attempt)

Hi everyone,

This is my first attempt at story captioning. let me know what you think.

If i had a cuckoldig wife/goddess, Brooke here would definitely be my first chioce. some of this is a little harsh, so and critisim is welcome.

here they are

here are the next two.
having trouble uploading.

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The next set.

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had to combine two different sets of the same scene.

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I really worship her.

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and the next set.

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there's a lot of spelling errors, need to work on that.

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nearly there. only two left.

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there we are. enjoy.:shame:

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tinycuc7..great 1st attempt!

well yes very nice captions, a good continious story with the right pics on it
will be waiting for ur next posts...

nice pics, but way too much anger involved - loses the moment

tinycuc7, keep going.


..............Huwen

Great series. Permisterally I loved the anger and disgust shown to the slave.
Keep it up

This series was outstanding for a first try, very arousing and sexy dialog, but using a spell check for the narrative before you paste it into the pics would make it perfect.......Please, more of the raw hardcore mental domination slave themes....

Liked em big time!