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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:20:55
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:21:48
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:23:18
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:24:02 · Edited by: Alcale
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:25:59
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Now Pam had enough of playing with her little boy of a husband! She was ready for a real man again!
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:27:46
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Left to his despair, loser hubby Tom has a surprise visit from the bridesmaid!
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:29:19
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And ends up servicing another Mistress!
An average woman that he, a Kent, would never have considered girlfriend material, now appeared like an inaccessible Goddess to him!
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:30:05
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:30:36
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Everyone lived happily ever after.
THE END!
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 12:31:49
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Do leave a word if you liked!
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Alcale
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 16:19:07
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As I said, do leave a word if you liked!
500 viewers in 3 hrs and nothing isnt gonna encourage me to post more and put that much effort next time!
Luckily, mickey has just arrived online so things should change.
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talented one
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 16:51:05
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great pictures Alcale!!
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huwen
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 17:01:40
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very nice Alcale!
every one you delivered I have to look for.
more please!
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tinypaul
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 17:13:22
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Best picts yet Alcale.. Thanks!
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Newbie
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 17:41:22
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Great work as usual!!!
Thanks for sharing.
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rossignoll
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 21:01:28
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Alcale, great work!
Heh, I saw that series some time ago (without captions, of course), but your captions made it a lot more exciting!
Keep up the good work! By the way, I liked all your other caption series, too
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Jack4Jill64
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# Posted: 28 Sep 2006 21:47:53
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Alcale,
Your work has always been top-notch and I carefully search for past posts to get caught up on your efforts. You have great pics and you weave an exciting tale. Please keep up this level of work.
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iwmwtcm
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# Posted: 29 Sep 2006 04:23:12
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I tip my hat to you. Nice work.
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Alcale
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# Posted: 29 Sep 2006 13:18:35
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Thanks for all this feedback!
Thanks in particular to rossignoll
I like the fact that you highlighted the "value add" on the pics. Makes me feel good about the effort put in to caption them and write the whole story around it! A lot of pics can be quite mundane until you give them the right context.
As you say, this set has been on the net -and then my PC- for a long time. As is the case most often, they inspired me the story. I see a bunch of pics which are OK but not that special, and my mind works overtime to create a hot fantasy context around them. When I think its a good one and I can select the pics I want and need to make it reflect my fantasy, such a project is born.
I know its asking a lot, but if any of you care to comment on the text part, I would be most grateful! After 1400 posts, I feel maybe sometimes I can go that far.
Dont be put off, I'm not looking for a line by line analysis, just a couple of comments on what you liked (or not) in the characters, the plot, the introduction of the characters' history, whether I am too redundant at times (the pitfall of always writing/captioning/posting on a single theme: cuckolding, as rich as the theme is)...
If that takes too long, just a quick word like the guys who've done it already is plenty, so dont hesitate
I'll have more. Maybe not as elaborate (so time consuming), but hopefully still quite hot.
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paparas
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# Posted: 29 Sep 2006 16:58:04
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That is a great piece of work and the effort that needs to go in coming up with somehting like this is acknowledged by everyone. This is indeed a project! Well done Alcale, keep up the good work. We are enjoying everyu bit of it (in this and other of your posts).
I particularly enjoyed the intorduction bit with the detqailed descirption of the characters (ivy league degree for Tom, the hot little blond persona for Pam and so on). Helps put the whole story and context and appreaciate the rest of it. Maybe it's just me but these details cerstinly do make the best posts for me.
Maybe a bit quick in the way Pam fell for the new stud. In a sudden in the shower..... That said, I tried hard to pick a weak point in the story!!
Thanks Alcale for all your excellent posts. Awaiting your new project...
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mickey6432
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# Posted: 29 Sep 2006 17:04:35
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they were outstanding as always. would love to see the cucky slurping up some stud cum
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wfcs
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# Posted: 29 Sep 2006 22:39:14
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Terrific
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alexnceleste
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# Posted: 1 Oct 2006 20:20:21
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Alcale,
Very erotic and interesting...would love to see more!
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4inchwimp
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# Posted: 5 Oct 2006 02:31:35
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very hot post an captions as always the text was very good an made the pics that more exciting
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draclif69
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# Posted: 8 Oct 2006 18:34:42
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More please
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EvilWoman
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# Posted: 23 Oct 2006 06:59:08
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Outstanding. That would be a very fun marriage to have, I have to say.
22 year old domme looking for a cuckold slave.
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loveit94
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# Posted: 23 Oct 2006 10:17:04
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best way to start out I think.
just love my fun a lot
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hotheat69
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# Posted: 26 Oct 2006 08:17:09
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Great story thanks very much
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peke60
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# Posted: 26 Oct 2006 08:27:22
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best what i ever seen
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draclif69
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# Posted: 3 Nov 2006 16:28:40
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Beautiful...bravo.
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